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2013-05-29 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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I disagree that There should be no minimum age for drinking alcohol. Because drinking alcohol can affect children. If we drink a little, alcohol makes us happy and pleasant. But if not, we can hurt other people and ourselves. So, I think we should decide minium age that can't drink alcohol.

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Hello Ms, Julia! Wonderful Wednesday to you! Thanks for posting your thoughts here. I guess, in every country there is a minimum age where a person can drink. Like for example in our country, the minimum age is 18. How about in your country? So I really agree with your idea that it can affect children. Of course. Talk to you later! ^^   Always, T. Kathrine   I disagree that There should be no minimum age for drinking alcohol. >> CORRECT ( proper capitalization) Because drinking alcohol can affect children. >> CORRECT! If we drink a little, alcohol makes us happy and pleasant. >> CORRECT! But if not, we can hurt other people and ourselves. >> CORRECTSo, I think we should decide minium age that can\'t drink alcohol. >> So I think we should decide on what age can a person drink alcohol.

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