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I disagree that There should be no minimum age for drinking alcohol. Because drinking alcohol can affect children. If we drink a little, alcohol makes us happy and pleasant. But if not, we can hurt other people and ourselves.
So, I think we should decide minium age that can't drink alcohol.
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Hello Ms, Julia!
Wonderful Wednesday to you!
Thanks for posting your thoughts here.
I guess, in every country there is a minimum age where a person can drink.
Like for example in our country, the minimum age is 18. How about in your country?
So I really agree with your idea that it can affect children. Of course.
Talk to you later! ^^
Always,
T. Kathrine
I disagree that There should be no minimum age for drinking alcohol.
>> CORRECT ( proper capitalization)
Because drinking alcohol can affect children.
>> CORRECT!
If we drink a little, alcohol makes us happy and pleasant. >> CORRECT!
But if not, we can hurt other people and ourselves.
>> CORRECTSo, I think we should decide minium age that can\'t drink alcohol.
>> So I think we should decide on what age can a person drink alcohol.
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