Homework#31
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Hi,teacher! Today\'s homework is something I\'ve never thought of. So, I\'ve tried to search about that.
These are my opnions.
How can we combat mercury pollution?
According to the article, there are some problems about mercury pollution in Korea because China discharge it into the sea of Korea.
So, I think the best way to resolve mercuy pollution is that each countries finds a point of cooridination about that.
But, It\'s a national aspect. In personal aspect, A expert about mecury said that you don\'t have to take fish and shellfish more than 340 mg and the main reason why people suffer from mercury poisoning is to eat them, not professional exposure. so we have to avoid to eat a lot of tuna, fish and shellfish because the main reason
강사 첨삭
Hi Jonathan!
Here are my corrections.
According to the article, there are some problems about mercury pollution in Korea because China discharge it into the sea of Korea.
>>Correct!
So, I think the best way to resolve mercuy pollution is that each countries finds a point of cooridination about that.
>>So, I think the best way to resolve mercury pollution is that each country finds a point of coordination about that.
But, It\'s a national aspect. In personal aspect, A expert about mecury said that you don\'t have to take fish and shellfish more than 340 mg and the main reason why people suffer from mercury poisoning is to eat them, not professional exposure.
>>But, that\'s a national aspect. In personal aspect, an expert about mercury said that, \" You don\'t have to take fish and shellfish more than 340 mg and the main reason why people suffer from mercury poisoning is to eat them, not professional exposure.\"
so we have to avoid to eat a lot of tuna, fish and shellfish because the main reason
>>So, we have to avoid to eat a lot of tuna, fish, and shellfish because this main reason.
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