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2013-05-29 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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We should follow our parent's or senior's advice that helps our life. When I was student, I didn't realize and I regret now because if I follow their advice, I'm sure I'm better person more than now. We shoud follow parents advice at least. Their advice from experience is really real and it's precious but, many young generations don't agree and think that it's just interfere. I think they are absolutely wrong. To study hard - I think this's the best advice and too much heard by parents. Nowadays, I have realized that's really true. If I were a student, I must study hard before.

강사 첨삭

Hi there!!! ^^ That was an amazing composition. I hope you\'ll keep up the great job! Keep on writing! ^^ Have a great evening ahead. Teacher Jeny ^_^   We should follow our parent\'s or senior\'s advice that helps our life. >> CORRECT! When I was student, I didn\'t realize and I regret now because if I follow their advice, I\'m sure I\'m better person more than now. >> When I was a student I didn\'t follow my parent\'s advice which makes me regret because if I did I should have been a better person. We shoud follow parents advice at least.>> CORRECT!Their advice from experience is really real and it\'s precious but, many young generations don\'t agree and think that it\'s just interfere. >> Their advices are rom their experiences which are real and precious. But many young generation don\'t agree on it and thinks that their parents are just interfering their lives. I think they are absolutely wrong. >> interfering To study hard - I think this\'s the best advice and too much heard by parents. >> To study hard is the best advice said by parents. Nowadays, I have realized that\'s really true. >> interfering If I were a student, I must study hard before. >> I should have studied hard when I was a student.

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