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2013-05-30 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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I disagree boys are most influenced by their fathers and girls are most influenced by their mothers.In fact, there is a same sentence in Korea. But I can agree with that. Because I 'm most influenced by my father rather than my mother. Of course, behavior and attitude are influenced by my mother because I have more time with my mother. But figure and habits are influenced by my father so that I have heard a lot I'm similar him when I go out.

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Hello there^^ Thanks for sharing me about your thoughts.. You were very expressive. Keep it up and review the corerctions here. Teacher Kelly   I disagree boys are most influenced by their fathers and girls are most influenced by their mothers. >>I disagree that boys are mostly influenced by their fathers and girls are influenced by their mothers. In fact, there is a same sentence in Korea. >>In fact, there is a same quotation that goes like that in Korean. But I can agree with that. >>Correct >>OR: I partly agree with that. Because I \'m most influenced by my father rather than my mother. >>Because I was mostly influenced by my father than my mother. Of course, behavior and attitude are influenced by my mother because I have more time with my mother. >>Of course, behavior and attitude were influenced by my mother because I have more time with my mother. But figure and habits are influenced by my father so that I have heard a lot I\'m similar him when I go out. >> But my figure and habits were greatly influenced by my father so when I go out I can hear a lot of compliments that I\'m just like my father.

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