homework
학생이 쓴 원문
If you got lost in an unfamiliar city, I would ask the way to anyone. In fact, I always get lost though I go to familiar city. So It's familiar for me to ask my way.
First, I seek a person who looks like very kind. And I go to him or her and ask the way, smiling. Then, the person give me good information to find the way easily.
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T. Kathrine
If you got lost in an unfamiliar city, I would ask the way to anyone.
>> If I got lost in an unfamiliar city, I would ask to anyone the way.
In fact, I always get lost though I go to familiar city.
>> In fact, I always get lost though I go to a familiar city.
So It\'s familiar for me to ask my way.
>> So it\'s familiar to me to ask where my way is. First, I seek a person who looks like very kind.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: Firstly, I will find a person who looks very kind.
And I go to him or her and ask the way, smiling.
>> An then smiling, I will go and ask him or her about the proprer way.
Then, the person give me good information to find the way easily.
>> And lastly, the person will give me a good information to find my way easily.
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