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2013-05-31 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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If I will be given the chance to name a newly discovered planet, I would you name it 'shabangshabang'. In fact, this name means 'twinkling, glittering' in Korean. I think it is most suitable for planet. From ancient times, it is main concern who give a newly discovered planet new name and which name is good for taking. But I rather thought easily. Planet is a star. So it should be twinkling. Therfore, if if discovered by Korean, I want to recommend this name, 'shabangshabang'.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ms. [Name]! TGIF! Wow! That sounds pretty and interesting. I wish that you will be able to discover a new planet and name it \'shabangshabang\'. kkkkkk No kidding. Anyway, you made a great composition today. Always. I hope you\'ll have a great weekend. I\'ll see you next week! Take care! Always, T. Kathrine If I will be given the chance to name a newly discovered planet, I would you name it \'shabangshabang\'.>> If I will be given the chance to name a newly discovered planet, I would name it \'shabangshanbang.\' In fact, this name means \'twinkling, glittering\' in Korean. >> CORRECT  I think it is most suitable for planet. >> I think it is most suitable for a planet. From ancient times, it is main concern who give a newly discovered planet new name and which name is good for taking. >> From the ancient times, it is a main concern if who can give a name to a newly discovered planet and which name is good.  But I rather thought easily. >> But I rather thought it easily. Planet is a star. >> A planet is a star. So it should be twinkling. >> CORRECT Therfore, if if discovered by Korean, I want to recommend this name, \'shabangshabang\'. >> Therefore, if a planet is being discovered by a Korean, I want to recommend the name \'shabangshabang.\'

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