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2013-06-03 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

학생이 쓴 원문

1. glass bottomed boat / could see / of fish / cruising / many kinds / in the / we We could see many kinds of fish glass bottomed boat in the cruising 2. to eat / left / she / on the counter / the bread / too hard / that was She left on the counter that was too hard to eat the bread 3. the feeling / experienced / ever / have you / going mad / that / you were Have you ever experienced that you were going mad the feeling? 4. work / on / we / expect / to / the / first Saturday / every month / of / you We expect you to work on first Saturday of every month

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],

I know that this activity will really help you with your sentence construction. please review the necessary corrections that I\'ve made. You are improving a lot and I commend you for that, you can express your thoughts and opinions and that is a big advantage on your part.

T. Jeny


1. glass bottomed boat / could see / of fish / cruising / many kinds / in the / we

We could see many kinds of fish glass bottomed boat in the cruising
>> Cruising in the glass bottomed boat we could see many kinds of fish.

2. to eat / left / she / on the counter / the bread / too hard / that was

She left on the counter that was too hard to eat the bread
>>She left the bread that was too hard to eat on the counter.

3. the feeling / experienced / ever / have you / going mad / that / you were

Have you ever experienced that you were going mad the feeling?
>>Have you ever experienced the feeling that you were going mad?
4. work / on / we / expect / to / the / first Saturday / every month / of / you

We expect you to work on first Saturday of every month

>>correct

 

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