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When I was in 3th grade,My mom and my close friend Jin and I went to all of the Korea's place.It is more fun than I go to the trip with my family. We went to Dae-Iun science museum,Dae jun National Art museum,Mu -Ju canyon,and national cemetery.We slept 7day.We had a fun.

Hi there TOM!! Thank you for sending this in. ^^ I am really glad to receive a composition from you. I hope to visit Korea. I am sure that there are a lot of beautiful places there. You are right, it is more fun to go on a trip with your family. I hope that in the future, you will be able to visit the Philippines. Tell me more about this story in our class. Great! You were able to express your thoughts well. Keep up the good work! See you! Teacher Nina Here are my corrections for you: When I was in 3th grade,My mom and my close friend Jin and I went to all of the Korea\'s place. >> When I was in third grade, My mom and I with my close friend named Jin went to different places in Korea. OR >> When I was in third grade, My mom and I with my close friend named Jin went to a lot of places in Korea. It is more fun than I go to the trip with my family. >> It is more fun to go on a trip with my family.We went to Dae-Iun science museum,Dae jun National Art museum,Mu -Ju canyon,and national cemetery. >> We went to Dae-Iun Science museum, Dae jun National Art museum, Mu -Ju canyon and to the National cemetery. We slept 7day. >> Did you mean: We stayed there for seven days. We had a fun. >> We had fun.