Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
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I went to see a movie this morning. The name of the movie is 'Before midnight' that is the last movie of the series 'Before sunrise' and 'Before sunset'. It was so good. I like drama, romantic comedy and romance movies. 'Before midnight' is a romance movie.
The main theme of the moive is that love between man and woman is getting more realistic as time goes. Life is so tough that the married couple who loved very much often argue and heal a breath.
I like the story of the movie because it is so real and I sympathize with it.
Please check my composition.
Thank you~
See you tomorrow. Bye~
강사 첨삭
Hello Ma\'am Eun Young! Wow! PERFECT! Yes, thank you so. So, I will call you again tomorrow Ma\'am. Enjoy the rest of your evening!
-Teacher Chloe
1. ach____veie
>>CORRECT!2. bel___fie
>>CORRECT!3. br___fie
>>CORRECT!4. c___lingei
>>CORRECT!5. conc__tei>>CORRECT!I went to see a movie this morning.
>>CORRECT!
The name of the movie is \'Before midnight\' that is the last movie of the series \'Before sunrise\' and \'Before sunset\'.
>>The title of the movie is \"Before Midnight\". This is the last episode of the movie series \"Before Sunrise\" and \"Before Sunset\".
It was so good. I like drama, romantic comedy and romance movies.
>>CORRECT!
\'Before midnight\' is a romance movie.
>>CORRECT!The main theme of the moive is that love between man and woman is getting more realistic as time goes.
>>CORRECT!
Life is so tough that the married couple who loved very much often argue and heal a breath.
>>Life is so tough so the married couple who loved each other very much often argued.I like the story of the movie because it is so real and I sympathize with it.>>CORRECT!Please check my composition.
>>CORRECT!Thank you~
>>Thank you! See you tomorrow.
>>CORRECT!
Bye~
>>Bye!
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