homework

When I was younger, I wanted to buy some stickers that anyone wanted to get. Though I knew that it was bad to do, but because I wanted to feel superior in my friend group, I stole some money of the other people in the academy. Then, I went to the library and bought those stickers. Of course, I felt guilty at the moment but I felt a sense of accomplishment when I get them in my hand. But my mother knew that and gave me a good scolding. Then, I could learn that stealing money is a bad thing that people should not do.

Hello Ms. [Name]! Colorful Tuesday to you! I really commend you for doing your homework. There are jumbled sentences but it still makes sense. You can easily compose your thoughts through the use of vocabulary. I suggest that you should use other terms for you to be able to express more your opinion. Nonetheless, good job! I\'ll see you later! ^^ Always. T. Kathrine When I was younger, I wanted to buy some stickers that anyone wanted to get. >> When I was young, I wanted to buy some stickers that anyone wanted to have. Though I knew that it was bad to do, but because I wanted to feel superior in my friend group, I stole some money of the other people in the academy. >> Because I wanted to be superior in the group of my friends, I stole some money from other people in the academy, though I know that it was bad to do. Then, I went to the library and bought those stickers. >> CORRECT Of course, I felt guilty at the moment but I felt a sense of accomplishment when I get them in my hand. >> Of course, I felt guilty at that moment but I felt the sense of acoomplishment when I get it in my hands. But my mother knew that and gave me a good scolding. >> But my mother knew about that and she scolded me. Then, I could learn that stealing money is a bad thing that people should not do. >> CORRECT