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I disagree that teenagers have jobs while they are still students. I have two reasons for them. First, they should concentrate on their school works. The obility of students is studing hard. So if they have jobs, they can't focus on their school work and the grade won't be good. Secondly, I think that they don't need much money. Because they don't use lots of money than adults, they only need some money for commuting.So I think students had better get some money from their parents as a pocket money.

Hello there! Thank you for sharing your wonderful thoughts about our homework. You did great! Just be careful next time on constructing your sentences. But that\'s just ok. I know that you did all your best to do your homework and that\'s more than enough for me. ~T. Kathrine~   I disagree that teenagers have jobs while they are still students. >>  I disagree that teenagers should have their jobs while they are still students. I have two reasons for them. >> CORRECT >> OR: I have two reasons. First, they should concentrate on their school works. >> CORRECT The obility of students is studing hard. >> The ability of students is studying hard. >> OR: The focus of the students is to study hard. So if they have jobs, they can\'t focus on their school work and the grade won\'t be good. >> CORRECT >> OR: So if they have jobs, the can\'t focus on their studies and they will not have a good grade. Secondly, I think that they don\'t need much money. >> CORRECT  Because they don\'t use lots of money than adults, they only need some money for commuting. >> CORRECT >> OR: Because they don\'t use much money more than adults. They only need some money for transportation So I think students had better get some money from their parents as a pocket money. >> CORRECT