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2013-06-04 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Yesterday I had a really bad day.I waked up at 9o'clock because I forgot to set my alarm clock the night before.I got up as fast as I could and I puted on some cloths. I ran into the kicthen and made myself a cup of coffee. Then I drank the coffee very fast and I ran to my car. It was a terrible morning. I will join a Je-Ju national discussion.So my teacher said,"You will join a Je-Ju national discussion" It start at Je-ju education city hall.I'm so nervous.ㅠ ㅠ

강사 첨삭

Happy Tuesday TOM^^ Wow! You will join a National discussion. I am so proud of you. I know you can do it! You just have to be confident and just keep your ideas flowing.^^ Always believe in yourself when you join a contest. Can you tell me about the topic of the discussion later in class? For your homework, you did a good job! We need to review verb tenses in class. Can\'t wait to talk to you. See you! Take Care! Teacher Nina Here are my corrections for you: Yesterday I had a really bad day. >> Correct! I waked up at 9o\'clock because I forgot to set my alarm clock the night before. >> WOKE, Correct! I got up as fast as I could and I puted on some cloths. >> Correct! , Correct! , PUT I ran into the kicthen and made myself a cup of coffee. >> Correct! Then I drank the coffee very fast and I ran to my car. >> Correct! , Correct! It was a terrible morning.>> Correct! I will join a Je-Ju national discussion. >> I will join a National discussion in Jeju. OR >> I will be a part of a National discussion in Jeju. So my teacher said,\"You will join a Je-Ju national discussion\" >> So my teacher said, \' You are will join a National dicussion in Jeju.\" OR >> My teacher said, \"You are going to join a National discussion in Jeju\". It start at Je-ju education city hall. >> It will be held at Jeju education city hall. I\'m so nervous.ㅠ ㅠ >> Correct!

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