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2013-06-04 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Wars _______________ everybody, and their destructive _______________ last for generations. -> affect, effect 2. Television has a strong _______________ on public opinion. -> effect 3. My mood can _______________ my thinking, too. -> affect 4. I see that you're trying to _______________ apathy, but I know that you really do care. -> affect 5. Falling on my head had a bad _______________ on my memory. -> effect Hello, teacher Chloe! Nowadays, I have very healthy meals because my mom makes many kinds of healthy food for me. My mom thinks that I had my leg broken because I didn't eat food well and my bone density was low. I agree with her opinion in a degree. So if I come back my home in Seoul after a month I would cook healthy food for my health. So I will learn some recipes from my mom. Today I learned recipe of cucumber food. I hope that you are very healthy. Take care! Bye!

강사 첨삭

Hello Ma\'am Eun Young! Wow, how sweet of your mom. It is very touching story that you just have shared me! Moms know best as what we say. I think I am missing my mom now because of your story. Anyway Ma\'am, it is quite important to take good care of your health so keep on eating nutritious food. Have a good night! -Teacher Chloe 1. Wars _______________ everybody, and their destructive _______________ last for generations.-> affect, effect >>Wars affect everybody, and their destructive effects last for generations.2. Television has a strong _______________ on public opinion.-> effect >>CORRECT!3. My mood can _______________ my thinking, too.-> affect >>CORRECT!4. I see that you\'re trying to _______________ apathy, but I know that you really do care.-> affect >>CORRECT!5. Falling on my head had a bad _______________ on my memory.-> effect >>CORRECT!Hello, teacher Chloe! >>CORRECT!Nowadays, I have very healthy meals because my mom makes many kinds of healthy food for me. >>Nowadays, I have very healthy meals because my mom prepares them for me. My mom thinks that I had my leg broken because I didn\'t eat food well and my bone density was low. >>My mom thinks that my leg was brokedn because I have weak bones and that I don\'t eat nutritious food for bones. I agree with her opinion in a degree. >>I agree with her. So if I come back my home in Seoul after a month I would cook healthy food for my health. >>So when I go back to Seoul, I should cook nutritious food for my health.So I will learn some recipes from my mom. >>CORRECT! Today I learned recipe of cucumber food. >>Today I learned a cucumber recipe. I hope that you are very healthy. >>CORRECT!Take care! >>CORRECT!Bye! >>CORRECT!

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