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Good evening [이름]! 

You\'re right!

Corporations should pay higher taxes since they have a higher income.

I think that your suggestions are great!

Anyway, please review the corrections below.

Enjoy your holiday.

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Government is operated by tax and if enough, citizens can take many benefits.

>>>Government is operated by taxes and if enough, it\'s citizens can have many benefits.

I insist on that government should be received corporate tax because our government is gradually decreasing to receive corporate tax since 5 years.

>>>I insist that the government should receive corporate taxes because our government is gradually decreasing to receive corporate taxes since 5 years ago.

>>>Or:  I insist that the government should receive corporate taxes because our government is gradually decreasing to receive corporate for 5 years now.

More income, more pay tax that is right but, our government doesn\'t do that.

>>>The more income that you receive, the more tax that you have to pay, but our government doesn\'t do that.

It\'s an ironic. 

>>>It is an irony.

>>>Or: It is ironic.

The most important thing, in terms of Korea government, increases corporate tax. 

>>>The most important thing, in terms of the South Korean government, is to increase corporate taxes.

Second, cut the salary and benefits of member of the National Assembly.

>>>Second, cut the salary and benefits of the members of the National Assembly.

They have had too much salaris even their supporters.

>>>They have had too much salaries, even their supporters too.

They are server for citizens, not a king.

>>>They are public servants, not kings.

They should have humble and respect but, they don\'t.

>>>They should be humble and respectful, but they\'re not.

>>>Or: They should have humility and respect, but they don\'t.

Citizens must be smart to avoiding to elect same people once again.

>>>Citizens must be smart and avoid electing the same people once again.

To prohibit spreading money for benefits to citiznes is important but, I think those methods are more important.

>>>To prohibit spreading money for the benefit of the citizens is important, but I think those methods are more important.

>>>Or: Prohibiting the spread of money for the benefit of the citizens is important, but I think those methods are more important.