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2013-06-05 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1.He2.They3.She4.You5.I 6.It 7.They8.We9.It10.He These day, I breed special plants. Yhe plants name is yung ya and carangkoa. They are like cactus. Some arw cute and some are beautiful. Carangkoa make flowers.The flower color is yellow. Jungya don't make flower now

강사 첨삭

Hi there handsome TOM^^ Thank you for doing your homework. I am really glad that personal pronouns is easy for you. I want to see those planst that you breed. Is it difficult to breed those kinds of plants? We are not going to see each other tomororw because it is your holiday. I hope that you will have fun. See you later in class! Teacher Nina Here are my corrections for you: 1.He >> Correct! 2.They >> Correct! 3.She >> Correct! 4.You >> We  5.I >> Correct! 6.It >> Correct! 7.They >> Correct! 8.We >> Correct! 9.It >> Correct! 10.He>> Correct! These day, I breed special plants. >> These days, I grow special plants.Yhe plants name is yung ya and carangkoa. >> The kinds of plants that I grow are Yung Ya and Carangkoa.They are like cactus. >> Correct! OR >> They are similar to cactus.Some arw cute and some are beautiful. >> Some are cute and some are beautiful.Carangkoa make flowers. >> Crangkoa produces flowers. The flower color is yellow. >> The flower is yellow.Jungya don\'t make flower now >> Yung Ya doesn\'t produce flowers now.

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