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2013-06-07 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Can you think of some good manners that are bad manners in another country? Each countries has differet cultures and sometimes it is caused by misunderstand between foreigners. So, we need more study to cultures and to have understanding own cultures when we have a plan to go abroad. For some examples. To up the thumb means the best but, some east Asia, it's insult. If you are in Arab, you shouldn't be touch your nose when you are talking to someone because it's insult too. Wherever we go, we should think about cultures.

강사 첨삭

Hi there^^,

Good evening! I appreciate your thoughts here^^ Good job I agree with you that where ever we go respect should

always be present, is not only about knowing their cultures.

Teacher Jeny

Can you think of some good manners that are bad manners in another country?

Each countries has differet cultures and sometimes it is caused by misunderstand between foreigners.

>>Each county has it\'s own cultures and sometimes it can cause misunderstanding between foreigners.

So, we need more study to cultures and to have understanding own cultures when we have a plan to go abroad.

>>So we need to study cultures and we have to understand it when we plan to go to that certain place.

For some examples. To up the thumb means the best but, some east Asia, it\'s insult.
>> For example, to show thumbs up in other countries means the best. But in some Asian countries it means insult.
If you are in Arab, you shouldn\'t be touch your nose when you are talking to someone because it\'s insult too.

>> If you are in Arab nations, never touch your nose when you are talking to someone because it mean insult too.

Wherever we go, we should think about cultures.

>> Correct

>> OR: Wherever we go, we should always consider their cultures.

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