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2013-06-05 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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1. The whole army is out of step _______________ Fred. -> except 2. I'll _______________ no money from that cheapskate. -> accept 3. Please _______________ this pot of Mama's chicken soup. -> accept 4. It will cure anything _______________ flat feet. -> except 5. Rip could do anything _______________ make money. -> except I love travel. I could not arrange with my friends' schedule and I like to travel alone. So I usually went to travel abroad alone. Last summer I went to Europe alone. I traveled for eighteen days. At that time I was so hard time in travel because I could not find the way to my hotel. And sometimes I was lonely. So now I want to trip with other people. The good thing to travel alone is that I can do everything as I want to. But the bad thing is that it is lonely and I have to solve the problems. In the former days the merit of traveling alone was more important than the demerit. In my next travel I will be with my friends. I hope so. Good night. See you next class. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ma\'am Eun Young! Wow! I really envy you because you have tried travelling alone. I want to experience it too. Haha! I hope one day, I can. Oh well, I guess am not just brave enough to travel alone. Anyway Ma\'am, I will talk to you again on Friday. -Teacher Chloe 1. The whole army is out of step _______________ Fred.-> except >>CORRECT!2. I\'ll _______________ no money from that cheapskate.-> accept >>CORRECT!3. Please _______________ this pot of Mama\'s chicken soup.-> accept >>CORRECT!4. It will cure anything _______________ flat feet.-> except >>CORRECT!5. Rip could do anything _______________ make money.-> except>>CORRECT!I love travel. >>I love travelling. >>I love to travel. I could not arrange with my friends\' schedule and I like to travel alone. >>I could not arrange a schedule with my friends so I travelled alone. So I usually went to travel abroad alone. >>I usually travelled abroad alone. Last summer I went to Europe alone. >>CORRECT! >>Last summer I went to Europe. >>I went to Europe last summer. I traveled for eighteen days. >>I travelled for 18 days. (In writing, you have to spell the words from 0-10, numbers above it can write as they are - just numbers) At that time I was so hard time in travel because I could not find the way to my hotel. >>At that time I have had hard time because I could not find the way to the hotel. And sometimes I was lonely. >>There were times that I was lonely. So now I want to trip with other people. >>So nowadays, I want to travel with somebody. The good thing to travel alone is that I can do everything as I want to. >>The good thing about travelling alone is that I can do everything I want. But the bad thing is that it is lonely and I have to solve the problems. >>The bad thing about it is that I am usually lonely to solve some problems alone. In the former days the merit of traveling alone was more important than the demerit. >>In the old days, the merits of travelling alone were more important that the demerits. In my next travel I will be with my friends. I hope so. >>CORRECT!Good night. >>CORRECT!See you next class. >>See you in our next class. Bye. >>CORRECT!

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