Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. The whole army is out of step _______________ Fred.
-> except
2. I'll _______________ no money from that cheapskate.
-> accept
3. Please _______________ this pot of Mama's chicken soup.
-> accept
4. It will cure anything _______________ flat feet.
-> except
5. Rip could do anything _______________ make money.
-> except
I love travel. I could not arrange with my friends' schedule and I like to travel alone. So I usually went to travel abroad alone.
Last summer I went to Europe alone. I traveled for eighteen days. At that time I was so hard time in travel because I could not find the way to my hotel. And sometimes I was lonely. So now I want to trip with other people.
The good thing to travel alone is that I can do everything as I want to. But the bad thing is that it is lonely and I have to solve the problems.
In the former days the merit of traveling alone was more important than the demerit.
In my next travel I will be with my friends. I hope so.
Good night.
See you next class.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ma\'am Eun Young! Wow! I really envy you because you have tried travelling alone. I want to experience it too. Haha! I hope one day, I can. Oh well, I guess am not just brave enough to travel alone. Anyway Ma\'am, I will talk to you again on Friday.
-Teacher Chloe
1. The whole army is out of step _______________ Fred.-> except
>>CORRECT!2. I\'ll _______________ no money from that cheapskate.-> accept
>>CORRECT!3. Please _______________ this pot of Mama\'s chicken soup.-> accept
>>CORRECT!4. It will cure anything _______________ flat feet.-> except
>>CORRECT!5. Rip could do anything _______________ make money.-> except>>CORRECT!I love travel.
>>I love travelling.
>>I love to travel.
I could not arrange with my friends\' schedule and I like to travel alone.
>>I could not arrange a schedule with my friends so I travelled alone.
So I usually went to travel abroad alone.
>>I usually travelled abroad alone. Last summer I went to Europe alone.
>>CORRECT!
>>Last summer I went to Europe.
>>I went to Europe last summer.
I traveled for eighteen days.
>>I travelled for 18 days. (In writing, you have to spell the words from 0-10, numbers above it can write as they are - just numbers)
At that time I was so hard time in travel because I could not find the way to my hotel.
>>At that time I have had hard time because I could not find the way to the hotel.
And sometimes I was lonely.
>>There were times that I was lonely.
So now I want to trip with other people.
>>So nowadays, I want to travel with somebody. The good thing to travel alone is that I can do everything as I want to.
>>The good thing about travelling alone is that I can do everything I want.
But the bad thing is that it is lonely and I have to solve the problems.
>>The bad thing about it is that I am usually lonely to solve some problems alone. In the former days the merit of traveling alone was more important than the demerit.
>>In the old days, the merits of travelling alone were more important that the demerits. In my next travel I will be with my friends. I hope so.
>>CORRECT!Good night.
>>CORRECT!See you next class.
>>See you in our next class. Bye.
>>CORRECT!
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