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If my best friend stole something from me, I would break with her or him. Because I think that stealing something not only is a crime, but also should not do.
In fack, I have experienced one of my friends stole my hair pin. That time, I forgave her because she is my friend. But, she stole my earings again! So, I decided to break off entirely and we became strangers.
So, if I will be in that situation again, I'll never forgive that friend to make the friend regret in person.
강사 첨삭
Hello there^^
Thanks for your time in this composition.
Thanks for sharing your great ideas all the time. I pity your ex-friend because she losts a good
friend like you. I hope that she already changed her attitude. Friendship, trust and loyalty are the things that we
should always value in a relationship. Thanks for this week and see you next week!
Teacher Kathrine
If my best friend stole something from me, I would break with her or him.
>> If my bestfriend stole something from me, I would end my relationship with him or her.
Because I think that stealing something not only is a crime, but also should not do.
>>Because I think that stealing something is not only a crime but also a bad thing that should not be done.In fack, I have experienced one of my friends stole my hair pin.
>>In fact, this thing happened to me in reality, that one of my friends stole my hair pin.
That time, I forgave her because she is my friend.
>>Correct
But, she stole my earings again!
>>Correct
So, I decided to break off entirely and we became strangers.
>>So I decided to totally end my connections with her until we became strangers.So, if I will be in that situation again, I\'ll never forgive that friend to make the friend regret in person. >>So, if I will be in that situation again, I\'ll never forgive that friend so that she would regret what she did.
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