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학생이 쓴 원문
I can't quote by myself yet, becuase I have tried to effort to better person.
강사 첨삭
Hi again!
You\'re right!You cannot just quote yourself.
It should come from you.
It should come from other people.
Anyway, enjoy your weekend.
I\'ll see you next week.
TEACHER JENY
I can\'t quote by myself yet, becuase I have tried to effort to better person.
>>>I can\'t quote myself yet, because I am trying to be a better person.
>>>Or: I can\'t quote myself yet, but I am giving effort to become a better person.
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