homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1.wii have lost
2.will be doing
3.will be eating
4.will talk
5.will swim
6.will see
7.will clean
8.will become
9.will travel
10.will be doing
Today, I ate Wal Nam Sam
It is like Shaboo-Shaboo.
We ate some vegetables and meat with rice paper.
It was delicious.
Do you like Shaboo_Shaboo?^^
강사 첨삭
Hi there my dear TOM^^
Happy Friday! It\'s your favorite day! Thank you for sending this in.^^ How was the homework? Is it easy? If you have any questions about it, just ask me in class. Wow! You ate a delicious food. Yes, I like Shabu Shabu but it\'s a bit expensive. I like Korean food more than Japanese food. See you in class! Take Care!
Teacher Nina
Here are my corrections for you:
1.wii have lost
>> Correct!2.will be doing
>> Correct!3.will be eating
>> will have eaten 4.will talk
>> Correct!5.will swim
>> will be swimming 6.will see
>> Correct!7.will clean
>> will have cleaned 8.will become
>> Correct!9.will travel
>> will be travelling 10.will be doing>> will doToday, I ate Wal Nam Sam
>> Correct! (Don\'t forget your puncutation mark^^.)
OR >> I ate Wal Nam Sam today.It is like Shaboo-Shaboo.
>> It is similar to Shabu Shabu.We ate some vegetables and meat with rice paper.
>> Correct!
OR >> We ate some vegetables and meat that was wrapped in a rice paper.It was delicious.
>> Correct!Do you like Shaboo_Shaboo?^^
>> Do you like Shabu Shabu?
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