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2013-06-07 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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1.wii have lost 2.will be doing 3.will be eating 4.will talk 5.will swim 6.will see 7.will clean 8.will become 9.will travel 10.will be doing Today, I ate Wal Nam Sam It is like Shaboo-Shaboo. We ate some vegetables and meat with rice paper. It was delicious. Do you like Shaboo_Shaboo?^^

강사 첨삭

Hi there my dear TOM^^ Happy Friday! It\'s your favorite day! Thank you for sending this in.^^ How was the homework? Is it easy? If you have any questions about it, just ask me in class. Wow! You ate a delicious food. Yes, I like Shabu Shabu but it\'s a bit expensive. I like Korean food more than Japanese food. See you in class! Take Care! Teacher Nina Here are my corrections for you: 1.wii have lost >> Correct!2.will be doing >> Correct!3.will be eating >> will have eaten 4.will talk >> Correct!5.will swim >> will be swimming 6.will see >> Correct!7.will clean >> will have cleaned 8.will become >> Correct!9.will travel >> will be travelling 10.will be doing>> will doToday, I ate Wal Nam Sam >> Correct! (Don\'t forget your puncutation mark^^.) OR >> I ate Wal Nam Sam today.It is like Shaboo-Shaboo. >> It is similar to Shabu Shabu.We ate some vegetables and meat with rice paper. >> Correct! OR >> We ate some vegetables and meat that was wrapped in a rice paper.It was delicious. >> Correct!Do you like Shaboo_Shaboo?^^ >> Do you like Shabu Shabu?

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