homework
학생이 쓴 원문
If someone accused me of a crime I didn't commit, I would explain in detail. For example, Iwill explain the reason why I didn't do, what I did in that time and show him or her evidence which makes me clear myself of a false charge. Then, after my crime will be cleared, I'll revenge on that person equally and make that person feel misery and regretful.
강사 첨삭
Hello MS. Julia!
Happy Tuesday!
Thanks for doing your composition.
It was hard for me not to smile specially in your homework because I can see that you are a person who won\'t back down as long as you know that you didn\'t do anything wrong.
And I think that\'s a very very nice character.
Enjoy the rest of the day!
I\'ll see you later!
And once again, thank you.
Always,
T. Kathrine
If someone accused me of a crime I didn\'t commit, I would explain in detail.
>> CORRECT
For example, Iwill explain the reason why I didn\'t do, what I did in that time and show him or her evidence which makes me clear myself of a false charge.
>> For example, I will explain the reason why I didn\'t do it, what I did in that time, and I will show to him or her the evidences which will prove myself against that false charges.
Then, after my crime will be cleared, I\'ll revenge on that person equally and make that person feel misery and regretful.
>> Then after my crime has been cleared, I\'ll also have my revenge on that person so that person will feel miserable and regretful.
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