homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I like eating something. So, if I had a chance to eat something, I could never give them away. Especially, I like eating some cake, ddukbokki, sundae and so on. So, when I hung out with my friends, I order a lot of foods so that I don't need to give away.kkkkk
In addition, I like my sweet puppy. Though the puppy bother my mother so that she doesn't want to take care of him, I very very love him so that I can not give him away. So, I have an effort to help my mother take care of him.
강사 첨삭
Hello again Ms. [Name]!
Thansks for doing your composition.
I was laughing on the part that you don\'t want to share any food to anybody.
OH MY GOD! kkkkkk
Anyway, you did a good job in doing your composition.
Just keep it up!
I\'ll see you tomorrow.
Always,
T. Kathrine ^^
I like eating something.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: I like to eat something.
So, if I had a chance to eat something, I could never give them away.
>> CORRECT
Especially, I like eating some cake, ddukbokki, sundae and so on.
>> CORRECT
So, when I hung out with my friends, I order a lot of foods so that I don\'t need to give away.kkkkk
>> CORRECTIn addition, I like my sweet puppy.
>> CORRECT
Though the puppy bother my mother so that she doesn\'t want to take care of him, I very very love him so that I can not give him away. >> Though the puppy bothers my mother and in return she doesn\'t want to take care of him, I love him very very much that I cannot give him away.
So, I have an effort to help my mother take care of him.
>> So I make an extra effort to help my mother take care of him.
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