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2013-06-11 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

학생이 쓴 원문

I like eating something. So, if I had a chance to eat something, I could never give them away. Especially, I like eating some cake, ddukbokki, sundae and so on. So, when I hung out with my friends, I order a lot of foods so that I don't need to give away.kkkkk In addition, I like my sweet puppy. Though the puppy bother my mother so that she doesn't want to take care of him, I very very love him so that I can not give him away. So, I have an effort to help my mother take care of him.

강사 첨삭

Hello again Ms. [Name]! Thansks for doing your composition. I was laughing on the part that you don\'t want to share any food to anybody. OH MY GOD! kkkkkk Anyway, you did a good job in doing your composition. Just keep it up! I\'ll see you tomorrow. Always, T. Kathrine ^^ I like eating something. >> CORRECT >> OR: I like to eat something. So, if I had a chance to eat something, I could never give them away. >> CORRECT Especially, I like eating some cake, ddukbokki, sundae and so on. >> CORRECT So, when I hung out with my friends, I order a lot of foods so that I don\'t need to give away.kkkkk >> CORRECTIn addition, I like my sweet puppy. >> CORRECT Though the puppy bother my mother so that she doesn\'t want to take care of him, I very very love him so that I can not give him away. >> Though the puppy bothers my mother and in return she doesn\'t want to take care of him, I love him very very much that I cannot give him away. So, I have an effort to help my mother take care of him. >> So I make an extra effort to help my mother take care of him.  

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