Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. A girl/woman who has the same mother and father as I do is my ______________.
-> sister
2. A boy/man who has the same mother and father as I do is my ______________.
-> brother
3. My father's brother is my ______________.
-> uncle
4. My father's sister is my ______________.
-> aunt
5. The son of my father's brother is my ______________.
-> cousin
I introduce my family to you.
My family has seven members.
They are my father, my mother, two older sisters, two younger sisters and me.
Two older systers and one younger sister are married so I have three brothers in law.
And I have four nephews and one niece.
All members of my family are 15. My family is so big.
I am third daughter. I am a middle member so I am lucky.
My father wanted to have a son. But he couldn't have a son so he was very sorry in old days. Nowadays, though he has no son he is very content and happy because five daughters are good to him and his wife(my mom).
These days, I am sorry that my parents seems like older and weak. So I think over being a better daughter.
I love my family so much. I hope that they are healthy and happy for a long time.
My family execept me live in the same province, my hometown. I only live in Seoul far from my hometown so I can not see them often. Now I am in my parents house until this month because I have a leg pain. I am so happy.
After leaving to Seoul in July I will miss my family so much.
So I will have a good time with my family before I go back to my own house.
I hope that you have a good time with your family.
Take care! Bye!
강사 첨삭
Hello Ma\'am Eun Young! Thank you for letting me know more about your family. Indeed, your family is getting big. Well, the bigger the happier. I think I am already missing my family. How much I love to always enjoy my time with them but I can\'t because they are far away from me. Anyway, enjoy every single moment you are with them Ma\'am. Have a good night!
- Teacher Chloe
1. A girl/woman who has the same mother and father as I do is my ______________.-> sister
>>Correct!2. A boy/man who has the same mother and father as I do is my ______________. -> brother
>>Correct!3. My father\'s brother is my ______________.-> uncle
>>Correct!4. My father\'s sister is my ______________. -> aunt
>>Correct!5. The son of my father\'s brother is my ______________.-> cousin
>>Correct!I introduce my family to you.
>>I am going to introduce my family to you.My family has seven members.
>>Correct!
>>We are seven in our family. They are my father, my mother, two older sisters, two younger sisters and me.>>Correct!
Two older systers and one younger sister are married so I have three brothers in law.>>My three sisters are already married so I have three brothers-in-law.
>>My two elder sisters and youngest sister are already married so I have three brothers-in-law.
And I have four nephews and one niece. >>I have four newphews and one niece.
All members of my family are 15. My family is so big.>>My family is getting big. We are now 15 in our family including our extended family members.
I am third daughter. I am a middle member so I am lucky.
>>I am the third child so I am lucky. My father wanted to have a son.
>>Correct!
But he couldn\'t have a son so he was very sorry in old days.
>>But he couldn\'t have a son so he was very sorry for himself.
Nowadays, though he has no son he is very content and happy because five daughters are good to him and his wife(my mom).
>>Though he doesn\'t have a son, he still have very content and happy because he have us and we are good to him. These days, I am sorry that my parents seems like older and weak.
>>These days, I am feeling sorry for my parents because they seem to get older and weaker.
So I think over being a better daughter.
>>So I am thinking to be a better daughter. I love my family so much.
>>Correct!
I hope that they are healthy and happy for a long time.
>>I hope that they will be healthy and happy as they get older. My family execept me live in the same province, my hometown.
>>My family except me lives in my hometown.
I only live in Seoul far from my hometown so I can not see them often.
>>I live in Seoul far from my hometown so I can not see them often.
Now I am in my parents house until this month because I have a leg pain.
>>I am living now in my parents\' house until this month to take a rest.
I am so happy.>>Correct!
After leaving to Seoul in July I will miss my family so much.
>>I will be leaving in July so I am going to miss my family so much.
>>I will be leaving in July so I will be missing my family so much. So I will have a good time with my family before I go back to my own house.
>>So it is my plan to enjoy and have a good time with them before I go back to Seoul. I hope that you have a good time with your family.
>>Correct!Take care! Bye!
>>Correct!
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