homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I wish several situation that I want to not occur.
First is that my precious people such as family, reluctants and friends are in the bad situation. If so, I'll have a difficult time that I can not get out.
Second is that my effort have been useless. If I made an effort to get good results, but results is not better than I expected, I would be disappointed and lose strength so that I do not want to do anything anymore. So, I want to get good results as much as I make an effort.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ms. [Name]!
There are indeed situations that we wish never happened.
So it would be better to prevent them from happening.
Be safe today, Ms. [Name]!
~Teacher Kathrine
I wish several situation that I want to not occur.
>> I wish several situations never occured.
>> OR I wish several situations didn\'t happen.First is that my precious people such as family, reluctants and friends are in the bad situation.
>> First is when my precious loved ones such as my family, relatives and friends are in bad situation.
If so, I\'ll have a difficult time that I can not get out.>> If so, I\'ll have a difficult time getting out of it.
Second is that my effort have been useless.
>> Second is when my effort has been useless.
If I made an effort to get good results, but results is not better than I expected, I would be disappointed and lose strength so that I do not want to do anything anymore.
>> If I made an effort to get good results, but the result is not what I have expected, I would be disappointed and lose strength making me not wanting to do anything anymore.
So, I want to get good results as much as I make an effort.
>> So, I want to get good results as much as I make an effort.
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