Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. My brother is (blind/blonde) in one eye. (= he can't see in one eye)
-> blind
2. My sister used to (die/dye) her hair blonde.
-> dye
3. My (complex/complexion) is much darker than my brother's.
-> complexion
4. Linda is always (tanned/tan) during the summer.
-> tanned
5. He's not bald, but he does have a (reducing/receding) hairline.
-> receding
I love yoga. I often spend my free time doing yoga.
I knew yoga first when I was a university student.
I read the article about yoga on the internet by chance.
After that I was interested in yoga. When I had my job after graduating the university I went to the yoga academy nearby my office.
So I have done yoga for 13 years.
In 2010, I attended the yoga leader class and I learned yoga deeply. I got a yoga leader certificate after finishing the class for one year period in 2011.
I don't want to be yoga teacher now. I will be a yoga teacher after I am 45 years old. I will do yoga hardly and learn yoga continually utill I teach yoga as my job.
You maybe have a exercise that you like. I hope that you get healthier by exercising.
See you in our next class.
Bye!
강사 첨삭
Hello Ma\'am Eun young! Oh wow! I never though that you really learned something about yoga Ma\'am. To tell you honestly, I don\'t exercise. I hope that in time, I will have the willingness to do it. Anyway, thank you Ma\'am Eun Young, I will try to be healthy. You too, stay healthy! So, better take good care of yourself everytime. Have a good night!
-Teacher Chloe
1. My brother is (blind/blonde) in one eye. (= he can\'t see in one eye) -> blind
>>Correct!2. My sister used to (die/dye) her hair blonde. -> dye
>>Correct!3. My (complex/complexion) is much darker than my brother\'s. -> complexion
>>Correct!4. Linda is always (tanned/tan) during the summer. -> tanned
>>tan5. He\'s not bald, but he does have a (reducing/receding) hairline.-> receding>>Correct!I love yoga.
>>Correct!
I often spend my free time doing yoga. >>Correct!
I knew yoga first when I was a university student.
>>I first knew yoga when I was a university student.
>>I first knew yoga when I was a college student. I read the article about yoga on the internet by chance.
>>I read an article about yoga in the internet by chance. After that I was interested in yoga.
>>After that, I got the interest in yoga.
When I had my job after graduating the university I went to the yoga academy nearby my office.
>>When I already had the job, I went to yoga academy nearby office. So I have done yoga for 13 years.
>>Correct!In 2010, I attended the yoga leader class and I learned yoga deeply.
>>In 2010, I attended a yoga leadership class and I learned yoga deeply.
I got a yoga leader certificate after finishing the class for one year period in 2011.
>>In 2011, I got a yoga leadership certificate after I finished the class for a year.
>>In 2011, I received a yoga leadership certificate after I finished the class for a year.I don\'t want to be yoga teacher now.
>>Correct!
I will be a yoga teacher after I am 45 years old.
>>I would want be a yoga teacher when I am 45 years old and above.
I will do yoga hardly and learn yoga continually utill I teach yoga as my job.
>>I will hardly continue learning yoga. You maybe have a exercise that you like.
>>Maybe, you exercise too.
I hope that you get healthier by exercising.
>>Correct!See you in our next class.
>>Correct!Bye!
>>Correct!
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