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2013-06-12 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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1. My brother is (blind/blonde) in one eye. (= he can't see in one eye) -> blind 2. My sister used to (die/dye) her hair blonde. -> dye 3. My (complex/complexion) is much darker than my brother's. -> complexion 4. Linda is always (tanned/tan) during the summer. -> tanned 5. He's not bald, but he does have a (reducing/receding) hairline. -> receding I love yoga. I often spend my free time doing yoga. I knew yoga first when I was a university student. I read the article about yoga on the internet by chance. After that I was interested in yoga. When I had my job after graduating the university I went to the yoga academy nearby my office. So I have done yoga for 13 years. In 2010, I attended the yoga leader class and I learned yoga deeply. I got a yoga leader certificate after finishing the class for one year period in 2011. I don't want to be yoga teacher now. I will be a yoga teacher after I am 45 years old. I will do yoga hardly and learn yoga continually utill I teach yoga as my job. You maybe have a exercise that you like. I hope that you get healthier by exercising. See you in our next class. Bye!

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Hello Ma\'am Eun young! Oh wow! I never though that you really learned something about yoga Ma\'am. To tell you honestly, I don\'t exercise. I hope that in time, I will have the willingness to do it. Anyway, thank you Ma\'am Eun Young, I will try to be healthy. You too, stay healthy! So, better take good care of yourself everytime. Have a good night! -Teacher Chloe 1. My brother is (blind/blonde) in one eye. (= he can\'t see in one eye) -> blind >>Correct!2. My sister used to (die/dye) her hair blonde. -> dye >>Correct!3. My (complex/complexion) is much darker than my brother\'s. -> complexion >>Correct!4. Linda is always (tanned/tan) during the summer. -> tanned >>tan5. He\'s not bald, but he does have a (reducing/receding) hairline.-> receding>>Correct!I love yoga. >>Correct! I often spend my free time doing yoga. >>Correct! I knew yoga first when I was a university student. >>I first knew yoga when I was a university student. >>I first knew yoga when I was a college student. I read the article about yoga on the internet by chance. >>I read an article about yoga in the internet by chance. After that I was interested in yoga. >>After that, I got the interest in yoga. When I had my job after graduating the university I went to the yoga academy nearby my office. >>When I already had the job, I went to yoga academy nearby office. So I have done yoga for 13 years. >>Correct!In 2010, I attended the yoga leader class and I learned yoga deeply. >>In 2010, I attended a yoga leadership class and I learned yoga deeply. I got a yoga leader certificate after finishing the class for one year period in 2011. >>In 2011, I got a yoga leadership certificate after I finished the class for a year. >>In 2011, I received a yoga leadership certificate after I finished the class for a year.I don\'t want to be yoga teacher now. >>Correct! I will be a yoga teacher after I am 45 years old. >>I would want be a yoga teacher when I am 45 years old and above. I will do yoga hardly and learn yoga continually utill I teach yoga as my job. >>I will hardly continue learning yoga. You maybe have a exercise that you like. >>Maybe, you exercise too. I hope that you get healthier by exercising. >>Correct!See you in our next class. >>Correct!Bye! >>Correct!

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