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2013-06-12 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

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What do you think is the most important characteristic you need to have in order to be successful in life? Dear Teacher Alice, I thick that self-confidence is most important. Because the person who can't make self confidence can not create positive relationship with another persons.

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Hello Ms. [이름]! Great answer! I also think that confidence is one of the best characteristics a person should have to gain success. :) Catch you later, Ma\'am! ~Teacher Alice What do you think is the most important characteristic you need to have in order to be successful in life?Dear Teacher Alice,>> Correct!I thick that self-confidence is most important. >> I think self-confidence is the most important. >> OR: I think self-confidence is the most important characteristic you need to have in order to be successful in life?Because the person who can\'t make self confidence can not create positive relationship with another persons. >> That\'s because the person who can\'t have self-confidence cannot create positive relationship with other persons.

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