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2013-06-14 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

학생이 쓴 원문

When I'm in bad situations, I used to lie to my parents or friends. For example, because I didn't get good results about seeking a job thesedays, I bought some SOJU made by fruits and drunk with my family. In the meantime, we were taking to each other and I could get lots of consolation and power up. Execpt for this, When I need some advices, I also lie to them.Especially, my parents have lots of experience than me, so I easy to get some good advices comparatively. If I worry about some problems by myself, they won't be solved and bother me constantly. But if I share the opinion, I can solve them easily.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Ms. [Name]! Thanks for doing you composition. Well, that was quite a lie! kkkk And your premises are good, don\'t you worry. What I mean is of course, you lie sometimes not for your good only but for the betterment of other people. And I really understand what situation you are in now. So I wish you the best. I know you can do it. Fighting! I\'ll see you later! ^^ Always, T. Kathrine When I\'m in bad situations, I used to lie to my parents or friends. >> CORRECT For example, because I didn\'t get good results about seeking a job thesedays, I bought some SOJU made by fruits and drunk with my family. >> For example, I didn\'t get a good result in my job hunting these days, so I bought some Soju made from fruits and I get drunk with my family. In the meantime, we were taking to each other and I could get lots of consolation and power up. >> CORRECT >> OR: In the meantime, we were talking to each other while they are consoling me amd cheering me up. Execpt for this, When I need some advices, I also lie to them. >> Except for one thing. When I need some pieces of advice, I also lie to them. Especially, my parents have lots of experience than me, so I easy to get some good advices comparatively. >> Especially that my parents have lots of experiences than me so I can easily get some pieces of advice comparatively. If I worry about some problems by myself, they won\'t be solved and bother me constantly. >> CORRECT >> OR: If I worry too much about my problems, it won\'t help to solve it and it will just bother me constantly.  But if I share the opinion, I can solve them easily. >> CORRECT >> OR: But if I asks some opinions, then  I can solve them easily.

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