homework
학생이 쓴 원문
When I'm in bad situations, I used to lie to my parents or friends. For example, because I didn't get good results about seeking a job thesedays, I bought some SOJU made by fruits and drunk with my family. In the meantime, we were taking to each other and I could get lots of consolation and power up.
Execpt for this, When I need some advices, I also lie to them.Especially, my parents have lots of experience than me, so I easy to get some good advices comparatively. If I worry about some problems by myself, they won't be solved and bother me constantly. But if I share the opinion, I can solve them easily.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Ms. [Name]!
Thanks for doing you composition.
Well, that was quite a lie! kkkk
And your premises are good, don\'t you worry.
What I mean is of course, you lie sometimes not for your good only but for the betterment of other people.
And I really understand what situation you are in now.
So I wish you the best.
I know you can do it.
Fighting!
I\'ll see you later! ^^
Always,
T. Kathrine
When I\'m in bad situations, I used to lie to my parents or friends.
>> CORRECT
For example, because I didn\'t get good results about seeking a job thesedays, I bought some SOJU made by fruits and drunk with my family.
>> For example, I didn\'t get a good result in my job hunting these days, so I bought some Soju made from fruits and I get drunk with my family.
In the meantime, we were taking to each other and I could get lots of consolation and power up.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: In the meantime, we were talking to each other while they are consoling me amd cheering me up. Execpt for this, When I need some advices, I also lie to them.
>> Except for one thing. When I need some pieces of advice, I also lie to them.
Especially, my parents have lots of experience than me, so I easy to get some good advices comparatively.
>> Especially that my parents have lots of experiences than me so I can easily get some pieces of advice comparatively.
If I worry about some problems by myself, they won\'t be solved and bother me constantly.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: If I worry too much about my problems, it won\'t help to solve it and it will just bother me constantly.
But if I share the opinion, I can solve them easily.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: But if I asks some opinions, then I can solve them easily.
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