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2013-06-14 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

학생이 쓴 원문

The one of my fondest childhood memories is when I went to China to study, I passed through HSK tests which is Chinese language test. For these, I studied hard even I forgot English......kkkk(So, to memorize words and grammars, I am studing English again.) In fact, I wasn't good at Chinese in Korea, even if my major is Chinese literatual and language. Futhermore, I disliked Chinese foods made from much oil or spices. It is too oily or hard to eat a lot. So, I don't want to go China for these reasons. But, after I arrived in China and adapted to there, I became a person who can not live without Chinese foods made from oil or spices. At the same time, I became enthusiastic with Chinese and started studying it hard. As a result, I could pass through Chinese tests!! And......I should study English hard as much as I forgot it.....ㅜㅜ

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [Name]! Again, thanks for doing your composition. I knwo that it\'s hard to study two langauges at a time but it seems that you are coping with both of them. ^^ I hope that I was able to help you improve your English skills since you mentioned that you already forgot about it as you are studying Chinese. Again, thanks for today. Have a great and safe weekend!! I\'ll see you on Monday. ^^ Always, T. Kathrine The one of my fondest childhood memories is when I went to China to study, I passed through HSK tests which is Chinese language test. >> One of my fondest childhood memories is when I went to China to study. I passed the HSK tests which is the Chinese language test. For these, I studied hard even I forgot English......kkkk >> CORRECT (So, to memorize words and grammars, I am studing English again.) >> So to memorize words and the grammar, I am studying English again. In fact, I wasn\'t good at Chinese in Korea, even if my major is Chinese literatual and language. >> In fact, I wasn\'t good in speaking Chinese though I\'m in Korea. Even if my major Chinese literature and language. Futhermore, I disliked Chinese foods made from much oil or spices. >> CORRECT It is too oily or hard to eat a lot. >> CORRECT So, I don\'t want to go China for these reasons. >> CORRECTBut, after I arrived in China and adapted to there, I became a person who can not live without Chinese foods made from oil or spices. >> But after I arrived in China and adapted to the life there, I became a person who cannot live without Chinese foods made from oil or spices. At the same time, I became enthusiastic with Chinese and started studying it hard. >> CORRECT As a result, I could pass through Chinese tests!! >> CORRECTAnd......I should study English hard as much as I forgot it.....ㅜㅜ >> And... I should study English hard as much as I can since I forgot it.

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