Homework

1. He kept a record of his employees. These employees were often late for work. -> He kept a record of his employees who were often late for work. 2. The man was sick. We gave a glass of water to him. -> We gave a glass of water to the man who was sick. 3. My friend has not returned the scooter yet. I lent it to him last night. -> My friend has not returned the scooter that I lent to him last night yet. 4. The girl is blind and deaf. You saw her handiwork just now. -> The girl whom you saw handiwork just now is blind and deaf. 5. They broke the promise. They made the promise before they left. -> They broke the promise which they made before they left. I always want to be slim so I continually diet. Losing weight is so difficult and very stressful. After losing some weight, at first I am very happy but it is more difficult to keep the weight. Excessive diet for a short term is apt to cause the side effect that is yo-yo diet. While I went on a diet I sometimes went on a binge. Then I regreted the binge and got a lot of stress. Nowadays I don't diet excessively. I try to eat low calorie foods like vegetables and fruits mainly and exercise more. This healthy diet is absolutely necessary. Maybe I seem like diet forever. I will do healthy diet and keep slim shape. I hope that you are always healthy. Take care! Bye!

Hello there!

Happy Monday!

Thank you for sending this composition.

Please go over the corrections I made for you.

Staying in shape is indeed important and we must follow a strict diet plan if we want to maintain a good body shape.

Stay healthy always! 

- T. Chloe -

 1. He kept a record of his employees. These employees were often late for work.
-> He kept a record of his employees who were often late for work.

>> Correct!
2. The man was sick. We gave a glass of water to him.
-> We gave a glass of water to the man who was sick.
>> The man whom we gave a glass of water to, was sick.

3. My friend has not returned the scooter yet. I lent it to him last night.
-> My friend has not returned the scooter that I lent to him last night yet.

>> My friend whom I lent the scooter to last night, has not returned it yet.
4. The girl is blind and deaf. You saw her handiwork just now.
-> The girl whom you saw handiwork just now is blind and deaf.
>> The girl whose handiwork you saw just now is blind and deaf.

5. They broke the promise. They made the promise before they left.
-> They broke the promise which they made before they left.

>> Correct!
I always want to be slim so I continually diet.

>> Correct!
Losing weight is so difficult and very stressful.

>> Correct!
After losing some weight, at first I am very happy but it is more difficult to keep the weight.

>> After losing some weight, at first I was very happy but it is more difficult to maintain my weight.
Excessive diet for a short term is apt to cause the side effect that is yo-yo diet.

>> Correct!

>> Excessive diet for a short term causes the yo-yo diet effect.
While I went on a diet I sometimes went on a binge.

>> Correct.

Then I regreted the binge and got a lot of stress.

>> Then I regretted binging because I got a lot of stress.
Nowadays I don\'t diet excessively.

>> Correct!

I try to eat low calorie foods like vegetables and fruits mainly and exercise more.

>> I try to eat low-calorie food mainly vegetables and fruits and I exercise more.

This healthy diet is absolutely necessary.

>> Correct!
Maybe I seem like diet forever.

>> Maybe I will follow a diet forever.

I will do healthy diet and keep slim shape.

>> I will follow a healthy diet plan to keep a slim shape.
I hope that you are always healthy.

>> Correct!
Take care! Bye!

>> Correct!