Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello music lover,
It was so good of you to make your homework immediately. You really are a diligent student.
Here are some corrections on your composition tonight.
^^kaye^^
I usually listen to music while I'm walking,because I like listen to music very much.
>>I usually listen to music while I’m walking because I like listening to music very much.
However, I don't have any preference about music, I just listen popular songs and pop songs.
>> However, I don't have any preference in music.I just listen to popular songs and pop songs.
Especailly, I like pop song, because I like english lyrics which I can understand and follow.
>>But most especailly, I like pop song because I like English lyrics which I can understand and follow.
When I listen, sometimes I wondered how they write these lyrics, because their lyrics are so
nice and emotional.
>>When I’m listening sometimes I wonder how they write these lyrics because their lyrics are so nice and emotional.
Also, I think, different language attracts me to concentrate their songs
>>Also, I think a different language attracts me to concentrate on their songs.
.And I think,listening music help to arrange their own mind and restore their pain ,due to thier stress.
>>And I think listening to music helps people arrange their own mind and ease their pain due tor stress
So music is so good media,listening music also really good habit.
>>So music is a good media and moreover listening to music is really a good habit.
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