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I disagree that When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out.

>>>I disagree that when a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out.

>>>(Be careful with typographic errors.)

And it is pointless to try and keep them alive.

>>>And it is not pointless to try and keep them alive.

I have two reasons for them.

>>>I have two reasons.
First, they are given by our ancestors.

>>>Correct!

So, we have an obility to conserve them and develop more for our descendant.

>>>So we have the ability to conserve them and to develop more for our descendants.

>>>Better:  So we have the ability to preserve them and to develop more for our descendants.

Only if do that, we save our culture and customs constantly.

>>>We can save our culture and customs constantly if we only do that.

Second, The nation which doesn\'t have own it\'s traditional skills or ways of life can not survive in this world. 

>>>Second, the nation which doesn\'t have it\'s own traditional skills of ways of life can not survive in this world.

When we meet some problems, if we don\'t have traditional skills or ways of life, we don\'t have any good idea to solve them like as the tree which has lost it\'s root can not stand up again.

>>>When we meet some problems, if we don\'t have traditional skills or ways of life, we won\'t have good ideas on how to solve them; like the tree which has lost it\'s root and can not stand up again.

So, we must cherish them for our better life.

>>>Correct!