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2013-06-17 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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1.alowed 2.flour 3.hare 4.our 5.one what color your country's sea? The corals leave in your country's ocean? The je-ju ocean doesn't have beautiful color. It just blue color. But,many people say"Indonesia-pacific ocean's color is green. Is it true?

강사 첨삭

Hi there adorable TOM Happy Monday! Thank you for sending this in.^^ Amazing! You got a perfect score! Judos! Our country\'s sea is blue. As far as I know, the color of the water changes because of the corals and seaweeds.  Don\'t worry I\'m going to show you some pictures later in class. I am really excited to talk to you. See you! If you have any questions, feel free to ask me in class.Teacher Nina Here are my corrections for you: 1.alowed >> Correct! ( Spelling check: allowed ^^)2.flour >> Correct!3.hare >> Correct!4.our >> Correct!5.one>> Correct!what color your country\'s sea? >> What is the color of your country\'s sea?The corals leave in your country\'s ocean? >> Does your ocean have corals?The je-ju ocean doesn\'t have beautiful color. >> The ocean in Jeju Island doesn\'t have a beautiful color. OR >> Jeju\'s ocean doesn\'t have a beautiful color.It just blue color. >> It\'s just blue. OR >> It\'s just color blue.But,many people say\"Indonesia-pacific ocean\'s color is green. >> A lot of people say that the ocean in Indonesia is green.Is it true? >> Correct!

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