homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1.alowed
2.flour
3.hare
4.our
5.one
what color your country's sea?
The corals leave in your country's ocean?
The je-ju ocean doesn't have beautiful color.
It just blue color.
But,many people say"Indonesia-pacific ocean's color is green.
Is it true?
강사 첨삭
Hi there adorable TOM
Happy Monday! Thank you for sending this in.^^ Amazing! You got a perfect score! Judos! Our country\'s sea is blue. As far as I know, the color of the water changes because of the corals and seaweeds. Don\'t worry I\'m going to show you some pictures later in class. I am really excited to talk to you. See you! If you have any questions, feel free to ask me in class.Teacher Nina
Here are my corrections for you:
1.alowed
>> Correct! ( Spelling check: allowed ^^)2.flour
>> Correct!3.hare
>> Correct!4.our
>> Correct!5.one>> Correct!what color your country\'s sea?
>> What is the color of your country\'s sea?The corals leave in your country\'s ocean?
>> Does your ocean have corals?The je-ju ocean doesn\'t have beautiful color.
>> The ocean in Jeju Island doesn\'t have a beautiful color.
OR >> Jeju\'s ocean doesn\'t have a beautiful color.It just blue color.
>> It\'s just blue.
OR >> It\'s just color blue.But,many people say\"Indonesia-pacific ocean\'s color is green.
>> A lot of people say that the ocean in Indonesia is green.Is it true?
>> Correct!
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