homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I agree that it is better to have students with different abilities studying together. I have two reasons for them.
First, It can more effective in schools. Studentswho have different capabilities can help each other. So, though someone doesn't know how to solve the problems, other students can help to get the answers.
Second, I don't think schools don't have an obilityto select and teach students. From the past, learning something is for everyone and school is justa institute for teaching them. From when did schools start to select students and discriminate them about learning? I think schools must go back to when they teach everyone without any discrimination.
강사 첨삭
Hi there,
You\'re actuaclly correct, learning is for everyone and schools are the guide for everybody to learn.
You made an excellent composition today. You\'re sentences are gramatically correct. I just added a few
words as correction. See you on our next class. Take care.
~T. Kathrine~
I agree that it is better to have students with different abilities studying together.
>> CORRECT
I have two reasons for them.
>> I have two reasons for that.First, It can more effective in schools.
>> First, it can be more effective in schools.
Studentswho have different capabilities can help each other.
>>CORRECT
So, though someone doesn\'t know how to solve the problems, other students can help to get the answers.
>> So, if someone doesn\'t know how to solve the problems, other students can help to get the answers.Second, I don\'t think schools don\'t have an obilityto select and teach students.
>> Second, I don\'t think schools have the ability to select and teach students.
From the past, learning something is for everyone and school is justa institute for teaching them.
>> From the past, learning something is for everyone and school is just an institution for learning.
From when did schools start to select students and discriminate them about learning?
>> When did schools start to select students and discriminate them about learning?
I think schools must go back to when they teach everyone without any discrimination.
>> I think schools must go back to the time when they are supposed to teach everyone without discrimination.
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