homework
학생이 쓴 원문
No, I'm not crazy.
There was a typing error.
I wanted to write " I'm lazy".
Do you like ice cream?
And then, what kind taste do you like?
It's a pop question! ^^
Thank you for today!
-S. [이름]-
1.) If given a chance, would you like to go to the moon?
At once, I dreamed I go to the moon.
But now, I want to be satisfied with this place. haha.
2.) Who do you want to go with if you're going to the moon?
I want to go with my family.
It would much different with tourist attraction.
강사 첨삭
Hello there!
Yes, of course you\'re not crazy.
I like ice cream! Chocolate ice cream and mango ice cream are my favorites.
It is my comfort food. I usually eat ice cream whenever I feel stressed.^^
Thanks for giving me this composition today.
I\'ll see you tomorrow.
T. Leny
No, I\'m not crazy.
>>> CorrectThere was a typing error.
>>> CorrectI wanted to write \" I\'m lazy\".
>>> CorrectDo you like ice cream?
>>> CorrectAnd then, what kind taste do you like?>>> Correct
It\'s a pop question! ^^
>>> CorrectThank you for today!-S. [이름]->>> Correct1.) If given a chance, would you like to go to the moon?At once, I dreamed I go to the moon.
>>> Once I dreamt to go to the moon.
>>> At some point, I wanted to go to the moon.But now, I want to be satisfied with this place. haha.
>>> But now I found satisfaction in this place.2.) Who do you want to go with if you\'re going to the moon?I want to go with my family.
>>> CorrectIt would much different with tourist attraction.
>>> It must be a different tourist attraction.
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