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2013-06-19 · 첨삭 강사 Leny

학생이 쓴 원문

No, I'm not crazy. There was a typing error. I wanted to write " I'm lazy". Do you like ice cream? And then, what kind taste do you like? It's a pop question! ^^ Thank you for today! -S. [이름]- 1.) If given a chance, would you like to go to the moon? At once, I dreamed I go to the moon. But now, I want to be satisfied with this place. haha. 2.) Who do you want to go with if you're going to the moon? I want to go with my family. It would much different with tourist attraction.

강사 첨삭

Hello there! Yes, of course you\'re not crazy. I like ice cream! Chocolate ice cream and mango ice cream are my favorites. It is my comfort food. I usually eat ice cream whenever I feel stressed.^^ Thanks for giving me this composition today. I\'ll see you tomorrow. T. Leny   No, I\'m not crazy. >>> CorrectThere was a typing error. >>> CorrectI wanted to write \" I\'m lazy\". >>> CorrectDo you like ice cream? >>> CorrectAnd then, what kind taste do you like?>>> Correct It\'s a pop question! ^^ >>> CorrectThank you for today!-S. [이름]->>> Correct1.) If given a chance, would you like to go to the moon?At once, I dreamed I go to the moon. >>> Once I dreamt to go to the moon. >>> At some point, I wanted to go to the moon.But now, I want to be satisfied with this place. haha. >>> But now I found satisfaction in this place.2.) Who do you want to go with if you\'re going to the moon?I want to go with my family. >>> CorrectIt would much different with tourist attraction. >>> It must be a different tourist attraction.

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