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There is no doubt that different contries have different rules which refer to children's behaviour with strict limitation. In my opinion, there are advantages and disadvantages in regard to the limiting behaviour. In this essay, I will discuss ideas that will help justify my opinion. Regardless of having different education systems, the Unchanging truth is that educating children is most difficult. However, if schools are able to control all behaviour of young students quiet freely, it may be easy to dicipline them as well as the frequency of accident risks of children can be minimized. It is effective way now that a series of unforeseable events have become very serious. On the other hand, there are a lot of side effects such as increasing stress and lack of practical ability. Children may have intensive stress every time teachers or parents keep pressure on them. In addition that, this phenomenon affects creativity improvement of children because they can do only what they learn with fixed mind. It is my view that strict rules have both positives and negatives. Therefore, I think that making rules for children should be flexible for different situation

Hi there! Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts about the topic. Please study the corrected sentences and let me know if there are sentences that don\'t align with your ideas. Rest now and see you in class. Sincerely, [이름]   There is no doubt that different contries have different rules which refer to children\'s behaviour with strict limitation. >>There is no doubt that different countries have different rules in disciplining children. In my opinion, there are advantages and disadvantages in regard to the limiting behaviour. >>In my opinion, there are advatages and disadvantages of limiting children\'s behaviour. In this essay, I will discuss ideas that will help justify my opinion.>>Correct Regardless of having different education systems, the Unchanging truth is that educating children is most difficult. >>Regardless of having different education systems, the unchanging truth is that educating children is difficult. However, if schools are able to control all behaviour of young students quiet freely, it may be easy to dicipline them as well as the frequency of accident risks of children can be minimized. >>However, if schools are able to control all behavior of young students quite freely, it may be easy to discipline them and the related cases may be minimized. It is effective way now that a series of unforeseable events have become very serious.>>This may be effective since there are series of serious unforeseeable events.On the other hand, there are a lot of side effects such as increasing stress and lack of practical ability. >>On the other hand, there are a lot of side effects like increase in stress. Children may have intensive stress every time teachers or parents keep pressure on them. >>Children may be highly stressed every time teachers or parents pressure them. In addition that, this phenomenon affects creativity improvement of children because they can do only what they learn with fixed mind.>>In addition to that, stress affects improvement of children\'s creativity because they only can do what they are told to do.It is my view that strict rules have both positives and negatives. >>Strict rules have both positive and negative effects. Therefore, I think that making rules for children should be flexible for different situation >>Therefore, I think that rules for children should be flexible or dependent on different situations.