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I disagree that as computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom. I have two reasons for that.
First, the role of teacher isn't just limited in education. They should teach how to live life honestly and politely. Also, they should teach why we live like that and they should be model for students.
Second, computer can not be teacher. It is just electronic facility. So, teathers only can use it for education. I don't think computer and peaple can change the role. They have thier own part in this world though function of computer is better than before.
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I disagree that as computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom.
> I disagree with the statement that as computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom.
I have two reasons for that.
> CorrectFirst, the role of teacher isn\'t just limited in education.
> First, the role of a teacher isn\'t just limited in education.
They should teach how to live life honestly and politely.
> Correct
Also, they should teach why we live like that and they should be model for students.
> They should also teach us why do we live in that way and they should be models for students.Second, computer can not be teacher.
> Second, a computer can not be a teacher.
It is just electronic facility.
> It is just an electronic facility.
So, teathers only can use it for education.
> So, teachers can only use it for education.
I don\'t think computer and peaple can change the role.
> I don\'t think a computer and a person can exchange their roles.
They have thier own part in this world though function of computer is better than before.
> They have their own part in this world though the function of the computer is better than before.
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