homework
학생이 쓴 원문
When I do my homework I always appreciate your advice seriously. And thank you for the compliment of my job.
Because of our classes I have learned a way to express a little bit of English. But my English is still a lack of dialogue in English. Feedback is still not easy to read. But when you advised my life my attitude I had awakened my passive and pessimistic attitude.
강사 첨삭
Hi there!
Maybe you mean optimistic in your last sentence.
Pessimistic is being negative about things and positivity is being optimistic.
Thank you for being a great student in class today.
I hope I helped you.
See you tomorrow.
--T. WENDY
When I do my homework I always appreciate your advice seriously.
>> Correct
And thank you for the compliment of my job.
>> And thank you for the compliment for my job.Because of our classes I have learned a way to express a little bit of English.
>> Because of our classes, I have learned a way to express a little bit of myself in English.
But my English is still a lack of dialogue in English.
>> But my English is still lack in dialogue.
Feedback is still not easy to read.
>> Correct
But when you advised my life my attitude I had awakened my passive and pessimistic attitude.
>> But when you advised my life, my att means being negative. Optimistic is possiitude I had awakened my passive and optimistic attitude.
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