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2013-06-24 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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I agree the most important to country's future is education. Riches donate their fortune and passion for poor people to make chance to escape poverty. Normally, they built schools or libraries in poor countries and citizens can study free in there. Especially, Koreans have enthusiastic of education for children. I heard normal 4 years age children go to English kindergarten. They have learned English since very young and I'm curious is it can be helped them??? Some linguists insist that it can be helped but, I think young children should be played in field or gym with peer group. It's better for them.

강사 첨삭

Wow! You really had time making your homework...^^, I hope you will continue the good work you\'re doing right now. Thank you for sharing your opinions about the topic for your homework. I will be glad if you share more...   T. Jeny   I agree the most important to country\'s future is education. > I agree that the most important in a country\'s future is education. Riches donate their fortune and passion for poor people to make chance to escape poverty. > The rich people will donate some of their wealth to the poor people to make them escape from  poverty.  Normally, they built schools or libraries in poor countries and citizens can study free in there. > Before, they built schools or libraries in poor countries and the citizens there can study for free.Especially, Koreans have enthusiastic of education for children. > Particularly, Koreans have enthusiastic on education for children. I heard normal 4 years age children go to English kindergarten. > I heard that children who are 4 years of age go to an English Kindergarten. They have learned English since very young and I\'m curious is it can be helped them??? > They had learned English at a very young age and I\'m curious of it. Does it helped them? Some linguists insist that it can be helped but, I think young children should be played in field or gym with peer group. > Some linguists insist that it can be helpful but I think young children should play in the field or in the gym with peer groups.  It\'s better for them. > Correct

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