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I agree that it's okay that children are engaged in different kinds of paid work. But it should be ranged in affordable work. For example, they can do work which doesn't need to much power, much time, much money. If they do like that, they can not only experience a valuable work, but also learn and take responsibilities. Also, they can learn how difficult money earn and they will save their money. But, I heard that some of chidren in the developing country are exploited and earn little money. So, I think there should be regulation in a law. And, each goverment should moniter and pernish bad employers.

 Hello Ms. [Name]! Thanks for writing your composition. I appreciate it a lot. What I commend you the most is that you really try your best to explain your side. And it conveys through your composition. Great job! I\'ll see you again tomorrow! Thank you very much! Have a great day ahead! ^^ Always, T. Kathrine I agree that it\'s okay that children are engaged in different kinds of paid work. >> I agree that children should be engaged in different kinds of paid works. But it should be ranged in affordable work. >> CORRECT For example, they can do work which doesn\'t need to much power, much time, much money. >> CORRECT If they do like that, they can not only experience a valuable work, but also learn and take responsibilities. >> If they do like that, they do not only learn the value of work but they will also learn how to learn how to be responsible. Also, they can learn how difficult money earn and they will save their money. >> They can learn the difficult to earn moeny so that they will save their money. But, I heard that some of chidren in the developing country are exploited and earn little money. >> CBut bI heard the some children in the developing countries are exploited and they are earning a little.  So, I think there should be regulation in a law. >> So I think there should be regulations or laws that would protect the children. And, each goverment should moniter and pernish bad employers. >> And each government should monitor and punish the bad employers.