Homework
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I was in the subway and there was no reception. That's why you couldn't get through me.
Here are some home remedies for a cold.
First, one is chicken soup.
I don't know where it originally came from.
The other one is ginger lemon tea.
It is good for sore throat.
those above are what I taught to my students before . But unfortunately I totally forgot the details of both.
I think the best treat for a cold is not to work and take a rest at home with sofe music , exciting movies and delicate food.
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Hi there! ^^,
Thank you for having time sending me your homework.
It was a pleasure sharing your opinions and your ideas.
I hope that you will continue to keep up the good work that you are doing.
See you then... bye.
T. Kristel ^^,
I was in the subway and there was no reception.
> I was in the subway and there was no signal.
That\'s why you couldn\'t get through me.> That\'s why we couldn\'t get through each other.Here are some home remedies for a cold.
> CorrectFirst, one is chicken soup.
> First, a chicken soup.I don\'t know where it originally came from.
> I don\'t know where does it originally came from.The other one is ginger lemon tea.
> Second is a ginger lemon tea.
It is good for sore throat. > It is good for a sore throat.
those above are what I taught to my students before .
> The following above are the things I taught to my students before.
But unfortunately I totally forgot the details of both.
> Unfortunately, I totally forgot the details of both.I think the best treat for a cold is not to work and take a rest at home with sofe music , exciting movies and delicate food.
> I think the best thing to do when you have a cold is to take a rest at home, listen to a slow music, watch exciting movies and eat nutritious foods.
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