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2013-06-25 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

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I was in the subway and there was no reception. That's why you couldn't get through me. Here are some home remedies for a cold. First, one is chicken soup. I don't know where it originally came from. The other one is ginger lemon tea. It is good for sore throat. those above are what I taught to my students before . But unfortunately I totally forgot the details of both. I think the best treat for a cold is not to work and take a rest at home with sofe music , exciting movies and delicate food.

강사 첨삭

Hi there! ^^, Thank you for having time sending me your homework. It was a pleasure sharing your opinions and your ideas. I hope that you will continue to keep up the good work that you are doing. See you then... bye.   T. Kristel ^^,   I was in the subway and there was no reception. > I was in the subway and there was no signal. That\'s why you couldn\'t get through me.> That\'s why we couldn\'t get through each other.Here are some home remedies for a cold. > CorrectFirst, one is chicken soup. > First, a chicken soup.I don\'t know where it originally came from. > I don\'t know where does it originally came from.The other one is ginger lemon tea. > Second is a ginger lemon tea. It is good for sore throat. > It is good for a sore throat. those above are what I taught to my students before . > The following above are the things I taught to my students before. But unfortunately I totally forgot the details of both. > Unfortunately, I totally forgot the details of both.I think the best treat for a cold is not to work and take a rest at home with sofe music , exciting movies and delicate food. > I think the best thing to do when you have a cold is to take a rest at home, listen to a slow music, watch exciting movies and eat nutritious foods.  

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