homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I think why are people born each one. I believe God wants me to use to good. Because of me wants to go the way of salvation of God a lot of people. I believe this is not the end of my death after that, ever.
강사 첨삭
Hi there.
Here are your correction for today.
I can\'t understand your 1st sentence so please correct me if I\'m wrong.
See you.
--T. WENDY
I think why are people born each one.
>> I think it\'s why people are born unique.
I believe God wants me to use to good.
>> I believe God wants me to be to good.
Because of me wants to go the way of salvation of God a lot of people.
>> Because I want to go to the way of salvation of God with a lot of people.
I believe this is not the end of my death after that, ever.
>> I believe that after death is not the end.
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