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2013-06-26 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

학생이 쓴 원문

It depends on the situations. If it's emergency situations, we must act quikly a.s.a.p. but if not, we should think one more about how can we solve the problems. Actually, the best thing is to prepare all crisises but it's impossible because human being can't control our life so, we have to learned appropriate act.

강사 첨삭

Hello, how have you been? :) I know that you are a very busy person, and I acknowledge the fact that you always do your homework regardless of your hectic schedule. Good job! :) I\'m looking forward to our next class! :)   T. Jeny   It depends on the situations. >>It depends on the situation. If it\'s emergency situations, we must act quikly a.s.a.p. but if not, we should think one more about how can we solve the problems. >>If it is an emergency situation, we must act quickly but if not, we should think twice on how we can solve the problem. (spell check: quickly) Actually, the best thing is to prepare all crisises but it\'s impossible because human being can\'t control our life so, we have to learned appropriate act. >>Actually, the best thing is to prepare during crisis but it is impossible, because human beings cannot control life, so, we have the know the appropriate action. (spell check: crisis)

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