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2013-06-26 · 첨삭 강사 heidi

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1.oyster 2.oil 3.?? 4.odd number 5.octopus I want to snorkeling If I go to Mashall Islands,I will have fun. First day,I will see leef to ride airplane. Second day,I will wear mask,fins,and snorkel. And I walk into the water,then I will take a picture of beautiful fishes.^^

강사 첨삭

Hi there TOM^^ Wow! It\'s the mid-week again! Thank you for always doing your homework. I hope that you are learning something from it. I am sure that you will have time to go snorkeling. How often do you go to the sea? I think you are fond of taking pictures of fishes, am I right?  It\'s really fun. Let us talk more about this in class. See you! Don\'t forget to eat your dinner. Take Care! Teacher Nina 1.oyster >> Correct!2.oil >> Correct!3.?? >> ORAL 4.odd number >> Correct!5.octopus>> Correct!I want to snorkeling >> I want to go snorkeling. If I go to Mashall Islands,I will have fun. >> If I will go to Marshall Island, I will have fun. First day,I will see leef to ride airplane. >> Did you mean: On the first day, I will see the reefs and ride an airplane.Second day,I will wear mask,fins,and snorkel. >> On the second day, I will wear a mask, fins and snorkel. OR >> On the second day, I will use the equipments needed for snorkeling.And I walk into the water,then I will take a picture of beautiful fishes.^^ >> I will walk in the water and take pictures of beautiful fishes. OR >> I will take a walk on the beach and take pictures of beautiful fishes.

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