homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1.go
2.gone
3.going
4.going
5.went
On science class,I have to write animal planner.
So I bought fresh water crawfish. I will breed It at school.
It is first to breed fresh water crawfish.I'm so excited.
강사 첨삭
Hi there TOM =)
Happy Thursday! Thank you for alloting some time to do your homework! You almost got a perfect score! Kudos! Wow! You have a new pet fish! How many crawfish did you buy? Tell me about it in class. I hope to see your fresh water crawfish. Please go over the corrections I gave you. See you later in class! I\'m excited to talkk to you.
Teacher Nina
Here are my corrections for you:
1.go
>> Correct!2.gone
>> Correct!3.going
>> Correct!4.going
>> go 5.went>> Correct!On science class,I have to write animal planner.
>> In Science class, I have to write a planner about animals.So I bought fresh water crawfish.
>> So I bought a fresh water crawfish.
I will breed It at school.
>> I will breed it in school,It is first to breed fresh water crawfish.I\'m so excited.
>> It is my first time to breed fresh water crawifhs and I\'m so excited.
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