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2013-06-27 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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1.go 2.gone 3.going 4.going 5.went On science class,I have to write animal planner. So I bought fresh water crawfish. I will breed It at school. It is first to breed fresh water crawfish.I'm so excited.

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Hi there TOM =) Happy Thursday! Thank you for alloting some time to do your homework! You almost got a perfect score! Kudos!  Wow! You have a new pet fish! How many crawfish did you buy? Tell me about it in class. I hope to see your fresh water crawfish. Please go over the corrections I gave you. See you later in class! I\'m excited to talkk to you. Teacher Nina Here are my corrections for you: 1.go >> Correct!2.gone >> Correct!3.going >> Correct!4.going >> go 5.went>> Correct!On science class,I have to write animal planner. >> In Science class, I have to write a planner about animals.So I bought fresh water crawfish. >> So I bought a fresh water crawfish. I will breed It at school. >> I will breed it in school,It is first to breed fresh water crawfish.I\'m so excited. >> It is my first time to breed fresh water crawifhs and I\'m so excited.

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