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2013-06-28 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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1.Peter's 2.smiths 3.children's 4.John's 5.Susan,Steve's I'm a reporter in school. And my friends too. Me,Gi heg,Na ra,Na re, and San won is press corps on July nineteenth,we will write school newspaper. I'm so proud of myself.^^

강사 첨삭

Happy Friday my dear TOM^^ FInally we reached the end of the line! Are you excited for the weekend? I think you are going to be busy, but I\'m sure you are going to have a great time with your family. You almost got a perfect score! Great! Wow! I am so proud of you! I know that you will do your best. What topics are you going to write? Tell me about it in class. See you! Don\'t forget to eat your dinner okay? Please go over the corrections below. Take Care!Teacher Nina 1.Peter\'s >> Correct!2.smiths >> Smiths\'3.children\'s >> Correct!4.John\'s >> Correct!5.Susan,Steve\'s>> Correct!I\'m a reporter in school. >> Correct!And my friends too.Me,Gi heg,Na ra,Na re, and San won is press corps on July nineteenth,we will write school newspaper. >> Did you mean: And also my friends named Gi heg,Na ra,Na re,and San. We will join a press conference on July nineteenth and we will write some topics in our school newspaper. >> OR: My friends Gi heg,Na ra,Na re,and San are also reporters. We will join a press team on the nineteenth of July and write some topics in our school paper. I\'m so proud of myself.^^ >> Correct! OR >> I am really proud of myself.

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