Homework

2013-07-01 · 첨삭 강사 Sheela

학생이 쓴 원문

1. You made three ______ (mistakes, errors, BOTH) on your test. ->both 2. We sent you that letter in ______ (mistake, error, BOTH). ( = by accident) -> error 3. We sent you that letter by ______ (mistake, error, BOTH). ( = by accident) -> mistake 4. I'm sorry, my ______ (mistake, error, BOTH). I thought you were someone else. -> mistake 5. The computer keeps giving me ______ (mistake, error, BOTH) messages. -> error I write a composition about my overseas travel. I like travel very much. When I was 26 years old I travelled abroad first time in my life. I regret that I didn't travel abroad when I was a college student like other students. The nation when I travelled abroad in the first time is Tailand. I went alone without any reservation of room and traffic method. It was so exiting, of course I was sometimes lonely and afraid. But I was so proud of myself and I had a very good time. Those times are still vivid in my memory. I really want to go Tailand again.

강사 첨삭

Hello there!

You did a perfect job on your homework! ^^

I hope that this activity helped you in some way.

Thank you for your composition also.

I do hope that you can find a chance to visit Thailand again.

Please review the corrections I made below.

See you in class!

-- T. Chloe ---

 1. You made three ______ (mistakes, errors, BOTH) on your test. 
->both

>> Correct!
2. We sent you that letter in ______ (mistake, error, BOTH). ( = by accident)
-> error
>> Correct!

3. We sent you that letter by ______ (mistake, error, BOTH). ( = by accident)
-> mistake

>> Correct!
4. I\'m sorry, my ______ (mistake, error, BOTH). I thought you were someone else.
-> mistake

>> Correct!
5. The computer keeps giving me ______ (mistake, error, BOTH) messages.
-> error

>> Correct!

I write a composition about my overseas travel.

>> Here is a composition about  my overseas travel.
I like travel very much.

>> I like travelling very much.
When I was 26 years old I travelled abroad first time in my life.

>> When I was 26 years old, I travelled abroad for the first time in my life.
I regret that I didn\'t travel abroad when I was a college student like other students.

>> Correct!
The nation when I travelled abroad in the first time is Tailand.

>> The nation where I travelled to for the first time is Thailand.
I went alone without any reservation of room and traffic method.

>> I went alone without any room reservations and knowing how to commute there.
It was so exiting, of course I was sometimes lonely and afraid.

>> Correct!
But I was so proud of myself and I had a very good time.

>> Correct!
Those times are still vivid in my memory.

>> Correct!
I really want to go Tailand again.

>> I really want to go to Thailand again. 

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