Homework

2013-07-01 · 첨삭 강사 Sheela

학생이 쓴 원문

1. (Do/Does) you speak English? ->Do 2. If they (do/does) come, I will be very surprised. ->do 3. (Do/Does) he always behave like this? ->Does 4. (Do/Does) they know that you're my sister? ->Do 5. I (don't/doesn't) know how to cook. ->don't The best city that I have travelled is Paris. In 2009, I went to Europe in the first time. The cities where I visited are Paris and Rome. I was also alone. At that time I was very tired because my work had been so heavy. So I suddenly had a vacation and I could not plan of travelling well. Paris and Rome were very beautiful and interesting. Paris was a very romantic city and Rome was very attractive. I had a very happy time there. I had very delicous foods and I saw beautiful sightseeing. Also I visited many museums. I liked the Musee D'Orsay in Paris and Vatican museums the most. The Eiffel tower in Paris was very beautiful. I went to the Eiffel tower several times. I will surely go to Paris with my lover next time.

강사 첨삭

Hello there!

Again, you did a perfect job on your homework! ^^

I hope you learned something from this.

You have travelled to a lot of places already. ~

I hope that you can find that special person to go with you when you visit Paris again. kkk ^^

Anyway, thank you for sharing about this.

Have a great day!

-- T. Chloe --

 1. (Do/Does) you speak English? 
->Do

>> Correct!
2. If they (do/does) come, I will be very surprised.
->do
>> Correct!

3. (Do/Does) he always behave like this?
->Does

>> Correct!
4. (Do/Does) they know that you\'re my sister?
->Do

>> Correct!
5. I (don\'t/doesn\'t) know how to cook.
->don\'t

>> Correct!

The best city that I have travelled is Paris.

>> The best city that I have travelled to is Paris.
In 2009, I went to Europe in the first time.

>> In 2009, I went to Europe for the first time.
The cities where I visited are Paris and Rome.

>> Correct.!
I was also alone.

>> Correct!
At that time I was very tired because my work had been so heavy.

>> Correct!
So I suddenly had a vacation and I could not plan of travelling well.

 >> So I suddenly took a vacation but I didn\'t plan for it well.
Paris and Rome were very beautiful and interesting.

>> Correct!
Paris was a very romantic city and Rome was very attractive.

>> Correct!
I had a very happy time there.

>> Correct!
I had very delicous foods and I saw beautiful sightseeing.

>> I had tasted very delicious foods and I saw these cities\' beautiful sights.
Also I visited many museums.

>> Correct!

I liked the Musee D\'Orsay in Paris and Vatican museums the most.

>> I like d the Musee D\'Orsay in Paris and the Vatican museum the most.
The Eiffel tower in Paris was very beautiful.

>> Correct!

I went to the Eiffel tower several times.

>> Correct!
I will surely go to Paris with my lover next time.

>> Correct!

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