Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there!
Again, you did a perfect job on your homework! ^^
I hope you learned something from this.
You have travelled to a lot of places already. ~
I hope that you can find that special person to go with you when you visit Paris again. kkk ^^
Anyway, thank you for sharing about this.
Have a great day!
-- T. Chloe --
1. (Do/Does) you speak English?
->Do
>> Correct!
2. If they (do/does) come, I will be very surprised.
->do
>> Correct!
3. (Do/Does) he always behave like this?
->Does
>> Correct!
4. (Do/Does) they know that you\'re my sister?
->Do
>> Correct!
5. I (don\'t/doesn\'t) know how to cook.
->don\'t
>> Correct!
The best city that I have travelled is Paris.
>> The best city that I have travelled to is Paris.
In 2009, I went to Europe in the first time.
>> In 2009, I went to Europe for the first time.
The cities where I visited are Paris and Rome.
>> Correct.!
I was also alone.
>> Correct!
At that time I was very tired because my work had been so heavy.
>> Correct!
So I suddenly had a vacation and I could not plan of travelling well.
>> So I suddenly took a vacation but I didn\'t plan for it well.
Paris and Rome were very beautiful and interesting.
>> Correct!
Paris was a very romantic city and Rome was very attractive.
>> Correct!
I had a very happy time there.
>> Correct!
I had very delicous foods and I saw beautiful sightseeing.
>> I had tasted very delicious foods and I saw these cities\' beautiful sights.
Also I visited many museums.
>> Correct!
I liked the Musee D\'Orsay in Paris and Vatican museums the most.
>> I like d the Musee D\'Orsay in Paris and the Vatican museum the most.
The Eiffel tower in Paris was very beautiful.
>> Correct!
I went to the Eiffel tower several times.
>> Correct!
I will surely go to Paris with my lover next time.
>> Correct!
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