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2013-07-01 · 첨삭 강사 Sheela

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Q: Who are these people? A: _____ are our best students. ->These 2. _____ are many good students in our school. ->There 3. Q: Who is that? A: _____ is my mother. ->This 4. _____ is a good restaurant nearby. ->This 5. _____ book is pretty interesting. ->This One of my hobbies is swimming. Swim is good for health and a good shape. When I was a graduate school student in the first time I learned swimming with my roommate for a year. At first I had a hard time because I learned more slowly than other classmates. But after six months I was good at swimming because I was not absent for swim classes at all. I hoped that I would really swim well at that time. I learned all four types of swim including butterfly. After that I used to go swimming regularly or irregularly. I like backstroke the most of four types. I usually like swimming in summer. I will keep swimming.

강사 첨삭

Hello again!

You almost did a perfect job on your homework.~ Keep it up!~

As for your essay, thank you for sharing about how you learned to become a good swimmer.

Swimming is indeed a great kind of exercise.

I hope that you will stick to your plan in doing this exercise regularly.

See you later!

T. Chloe --

 1. Q: Who are these people? A: _____ are our best students. 
->These
>> Correct!

2. _____ are many good students in our school.
->There

>> Correct!
3. Q: Who is that? A: _____ is my mother.
->This

>>  Correct!
4. _____ is a good restaurant nearby.
->This

>> Answer: There
5. _____ book is pretty interesting.
->This

>> Correct!

One of my hobbies is swimming.

>>  Correct!
Swim is good for health and a good shape.

>>  Swimming is good for health and in maintaining a good body shape.
When I was a graduate school student in the first time I learned swimming with my roommate for a year.

>>  When I was a graduate school student, I learned how to swim with my roommate for a year.
At first I had a hard time because I learned more slowly than other classmates.

>> Correct.
But after six months I was good at swimming because I was not absent for swim classes at all.

>> But after six months, I became a good swimmer because I was never absent for my swimming class.
I hoped that I would really swim well at that time.

>> Correct.
I learned all four types of swim including butterfly.

>> I leaned all four types of swimming strokes including the butterfly.
After that I used to go swimming regularly or irregularly.

>> After that, I started to go swimming regularly.
I like backstroke the most of four types.

>> I like the backstroke most among all the swimming strokes.
I usually like swimming in summer.

>> Correct.
I will keep swimming.

>> Correct.

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