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1. His website was banned because of _illicit_ content.
Another sentence using the word 'illicit'
: Facebook is a private site. Thus, people could post any content on our site.
However if the contents include illicit meaning and anyone consider it like that, that will be banned and Facebook might cancel your account.
2. This water is unsafe to drink because it contains _lead_.
: Since damage environment throughout the earth become severe, a large number of disease affect to human. Especially, lead in the water have great effect on embryo.
3. That was obviously an _allusion__ to his previous novel.
: Before I took the final exam, teacher made an allusion to the exam.
4. Make sure you _cite_ all of your references.
:To persuade boss to approve our proposal, our team made a significantly well-made presentation by citing figures and references.
5. This _site_ is a great place to practice English grammar.
: This site would be nice to lose the stress.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Jo!
Thank you for your composition today! I really admire you for always trying to make your own sentences using the vocabularies given in the homework. Keep it up! Take care and have a nice day!
T. JanE ^^
1. His website was banned because of _illicit_ content.>> Correct Another sentence using the word \'illicit\':
>> Correct
Facebook is a private site.
>> Correct
Thus, people could post any content on our site.>> Correct
However if the contents include illicit meaning and anyone consider it like that, that will be banned and Facebook might cancel your account.>> However, if there is an illicit content and everyone considers it as such, it will be banned and Facebook might cancel your account.2. This water is unsafe to drink because it contains _lead_.>> Correct : Since damage environment throughout the earth become severe, a large number of disease affect to human.
>> Since there is a severe damage throughout the Earth, a large number of diseases affect humans.
Especially, lead in the water have great effect on embryo.>> Water containing lead is harmful to an embryo.3. That was obviously an _allusion__ to his previous novel.>> Correct : Before I took the final exam, teacher made an allusion to the exam.>> Before I took the final exam, the teacher made an allusion to the exam.4. Make sure you _cite_ all of your references.>> Correct :To persuade boss to approve our proposal, our team made a significantly well-made presentation by citing figures and references.>> In order to persuade our boss to approve our proposal, our team made a significant, well-made presentation by citing figures and references.5. This _site_ is a great place to practice English grammar.>> Correct : This site would be nice to lose the stress.
>> This site is a good stress-reliever.
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