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I agree that smoking should be banned in public places.I have two reasons for that. First, smoking is harmful. Though it has a filter, it can not filter everything out. So, having a distance from smoking is the best way to protect our health. And government should make a regulation and ban it in the public area for us. Second, there are many people in the public places, such as those who don't like smoking, young or old people. Especially, smoking harms young or old people. They must be careful from those harmful things. Also, second-hand smoking make them get sick such as lung cancer. So, they must have a distance from the smokers.

Hi there,      What a great composition you have today. Yes I agree with you, smoking is dangerous for our health. So there must be a ban for smoking in public areas to protect non - smokers.      You were able to make grammatically correct sentences. I just added/removed  some articles/ words to make your composition better. I\'m looking forward to meet you. Have a great day! ~T. Maria~   I agree that smoking should be banned in public places.I have two reasons for that. >> CORRECTFirst, smoking is harmful. Though it has a filter, it can not filter everything out. >> CORRECT So, having a distance from smoking is the best way to protect our health. >> CORRECT >> So, keeping a distance from smoking is the best way to protect our health. And government should make a regulation and ban it in the public area for us. >>And the government should make a regulation to ban it in public areas. Second, there are many people in the public places, such as those who don\'t like smoking, young or old people. >> CORRECT >> Secondly, there are many people in public places who don\'t like smoking especially the young or the old people. Especially, smoking harms young or old people. >> Smoking harms young or old people. >> Smoking harms people. They must be careful from those harmful things. >> CORRECT Also, second-hand smoking make them get sick such as lung cancer. >> Second-hand smoking could also make them sick such as having lung cancer. So, they must have a distance from the smokers. >> So, they must stay away from smokers. >> So, they must distance themselves from smokers.